DRABBLE CHALLENGE ~ LURE

The drabble challenge is a weekly challenge , hosted by Aheila on her blog : http://thewriteaholicblog.wordpress.com  A reminder how it works : read the prompt and find your angle ; write a drabble (100 word story , give or take 5 words) ; post a direct link to the drabble in your comments .

                                                        

The bait … a look , a glance – discreet, veiled, coquettish, lips pouting, eyes smouldering, sheer stockings, stilleto heels ; the possibility of unimaginable treasures ; the delicate web is spun … round and round, weaving, spinning ; like a dangerous dance … intricate steps , enticing rhythms , irregular beats ; the magnetism , the power , too strong to resist … anticipation of forbidden fruit … succumb … the first taste … adrenaline rush produces a dizzy high … resistance rears its ugly head again … too late … no going back now … sink deeper and deeper … total submission … spiral out of control … the dance of life or death ? entrapment or freedom ?

4 Comments

  1. Raghu on April 25, 2011 at 12:57 am

     Nice build-up to ultimate bliss beyond reason or a cardinal sin of impropriiety?

    • mish on April 25, 2011 at 2:05 pm

      … equivalent to being caught between a rock & a hard place …?

  2. ReGypsy on April 27, 2011 at 6:36 am

    I like the build up M! ;o)

    • mish on April 27, 2011 at 8:32 am

      Thanks Re ~ how have you been ? We’ve missed you at the weekly drabble session …… 🙂

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