Five Sentence Fiction #20 – FEAST
What it’s all about: Five Sentence Fiction is about packing a powerful punch in a tiny fist. Each week the hostess will post a one word inspiration, then anyone wishing to participate will write a five sentence story based on the prompt word. The word does not have to appear in your five sentences, just use it for direction
The ritual, an annual convergence of the three families, was hosted at an undisclosed location…
Family members hid a range of ill-feelings behind carefully constructed masks of affability.
Underhand dealings, backstabbing manoeuvres and clandestine business ventures were put aside, in favour of gustatory delights which catered for different culinary cultures; tables overflowing with an endless array of delectable dishes, scrumptious seafood, spicy Oriental delights, succulent roasts and meats, rich gravies and sauces, mouth-watering cakes and pastries, exquisite desserts…
He blended into the crowd, sauntered pass a distinguished, tuxedo-clad gentleman with a silver walking cane; appeared to listen attentively as he exchanged pleasantries with a strangely intense-looking, yet pale and insipid creature of Slavic origin; lifted a champagne flute from a waiter who whisked by, and raised it in mock-salute, to a young woman whose angular, smoky-eyed visage reminded him of a panther stalking an unsuspecting victim.
Everybody had an agenda of sorts, all the key players were in position and he was ready to give the signal.
That's rich! Very good, Michelle. I can feel the tension…
This is a fun idea! I enjoyed this very much 😉
Three families getting together…. masks of affability….sounds like the start of a good murder mystery I like it! 🙂
Ooh, signal for what?
Nicely done!
This is a really nice post. I enjoyed it very much.
This was my favorite line: a young woman whose angular, smoky-eyed visage reminded him of a panther stalking an unsuspecting victim. Loved this!
I loved the descriptions and the mystery behind their movements.
That's one family gather I'd prefer to avoid.
Nicely done! Great tension.
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Thanks,
Nas
This is not going to end well. And he is violaitng a sacred trust.
Reminds me of the Red Wedding form ame of Thrones.
Cheers!
JzB
From Game of Thrones, that is.
I think this is a great exercise. Love the line, "Family members hid a range of ill-feelings behind carefully constructed masks of affability."
A great set up, but I want the delivery now! Nice writing, well done.
Ack! The signal? Now I want to know more!
perfect setting for
murder! dun dun daaaaaaa!
great story telling!
I also love the "masks of affability" line. We all know people like this, and they don't necessarily have to be murderers.
Julie
Ooh, delicious – and so much more to tantalise the appetiite:-) This is such a difficult discipline/challenge.
(Thank you for your concern about our lovely Ocicat Winston – it looks as though he's turned the corner, but you never can quite tell with cats:-))
Diabolical story and delicious picture. Great piece.
It made me think of the board game Clue! And now I'm hungry after looking at that table, so I'm going to raid the refrigerator 🙂
This sounds not unlike some of the gatherings I have attended, family and otherwise! Great intro, definitely leaves us wanting for more!
Great flash fiction piece, very mysterious.
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