SENSATIONAL HAIKU & WHIMSICAL WEDNESDAY~4

                      Outline the concept

                       Initial, rough idea

                       Still needs extra work

 

                       Revise the first draft

                    Check for errors once again

                         Still far from perfect

 

                             Further revision

                          Send it to beta readers

                               Half the battle won

    

        DRAFT If you would like to participate in this challenge, you can find out more here.

… and back to the weird, whacky and sometimes wonderful words (from the dag's dictionary), to keep you entertained for the rest of the week…

Abdomino effect – descriptive of the way a group of male friends gradually gets fatter, as each guy in turn lets himself go.

Snoregasm – the particularly delicious and abandoned moment experienced after you've pressed the snooze button on your alarm clock.

Hope couture – the item of clothing you keep around for years in the vain hope you might fit back into it some day.

16 Comments

  1. Karen on February 22, 2012 at 8:41 pm

    A great haiku trio. I know that sequence well! Love the abdomino effect!

    • mish on February 23, 2012 at 6:18 pm

      Thanks Karen – I couldn’t resist posting the abdomino effect – it’s a classic!*giggles*

  2. Alex J. Cavanaugh on February 22, 2012 at 9:39 pm

    That covers the steps all right!
    And that last definition is great.

    • mish on February 23, 2012 at 6:23 pm

      Seems like I got the steps in the correct sequence… well, hopefully…

  3. The Golden Eagle on February 22, 2012 at 11:10 pm

    Great haiku!
    I find myself in the first one right now.
     
     

    • mish on February 23, 2012 at 6:26 pm

      Thanks Eags… so you’re in the early stages of a creation? Great! Good luck with the new project.

  4. tara tyler on February 22, 2012 at 11:13 pm

    hard work pays off!
    nice haiku =)

    • mish on February 23, 2012 at 6:27 pm

      Yep, I definitely agree… 100% 🙂

  5. Carol on February 22, 2012 at 11:23 pm

    Neat haiku ~ thanks, ~ namaste, carol (A Creative Harbor) 

    • mish on February 23, 2012 at 6:28 pm

      Thanks for the visit, Carol.

  6. Ria on February 23, 2012 at 3:50 am

    I guess you can tell I was horrible in English class – since writing drafts never occured to me!

    • mish on February 23, 2012 at 6:31 pm

      Were you? 🙂 Anyway, we learn something new everyday… it never ends…

  7. zongrik on February 24, 2012 at 4:35 am

    so you took the writers draft to heart
     
    <a href="http://zongrik.wordpress.com/2012/02/23/four-jonestown-senryu/">four jonestown senryuZ</a>

  8. mish on February 24, 2012 at 10:43 am

    I did take it to heart, didn't I? I left out the other meanings of the word. Oh well, just shows where my mind is at… thanks for the visit, Zongrik.

  9. becca givens on February 27, 2012 at 5:05 am

    Delightful! Thanks for sharing ~~ Happy week!

    • mish on February 27, 2012 at 12:55 pm

      Thanks Becca – and a happy one to you, too! 🙂

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