Five Sentence Fiction #12 – NIGHT
What it’s all about: Five Sentence Fiction is about packing a powerful punch in a tiny fist. Each week the hostess will post a one word inspiration, then anyone wishing to participate will write a five sentence story based on the prompt word. The word does not have to appear in your five sentences, just use it for direction.
Giabella pirouetted on fishnet-stockinged stiletto heels, to gaze at the scantily-clad mirror image.
Satisfied, she applied her favourite shade of ruby lipstick, checked her wristwatch and lifted a silver clutch purse from the hallway table, en-route to the front door.
Childhood-induced terrors, that even the Eminent Doctor had failed to fix, flooded her mind, as she completed the ritual.
She melted into the inky darkness.
It held new terrors for her, but SHE was in control now!
Another bestselling piece, my dear!
Hugs and chocolate,
Shelly
I felt both her terror and control. Fantastic piece.
Sounds like she' the on who causes the terrors now!
Not sure what she's got on her mind but it sounds like trouble for someone. Nicely menacing.
I’d definitely like to know more about her and her plans for the night. Well done showing her determination to overcome her lingering fear of it!
Giabella sounds like she is one dangerous, don't-mess-with-me, lady.
Wow. Very well-drawn character. I completely understood the demons that drove her to this need for this type of control. Excellent piece.
Remind me never to get on your bad side! You certainly know a thing or two about very dangerous women! Very impressive!
Sets the stage nicely. Good job!
In control and on the go! Sounds like she if finally going to have a night to remember. Great piece Mich, I could picture her perfectly. (;
Loved that. Great stuff as usual!
Cheers,
W.
What a funky looking prompt and what a great take on it!
go night woman!
great piece!
I want to know what she's up to. Now you have to write the rest of the story!
This was a sexy piece. It lured me right in!
You should publish these. As always, you never cease to amaze me with a big story in a small number of words.
Don't mess with her now.
oh fantastic. Love it.
Are we talking Dominatrix here?…
I like it. Very evocative, and strong characterisation in those few lines.
AWESOME!!!!
I love it!
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I amaylaays fascinated by the ways we take control after unmanageable pain or anguish has gripped our lives.
Criminy…that should have been, " I am always…"
Wondering what terrors the inky darkness holds for her….. I am super curious Michelle. As usual great lines 🙂
Oooh. That was good. I want to read more. Come on!
Thanks guys! 🙂
What a fab image. Consider me hooked – no pun intended.
Nice! She sounds like one fierce lady 🙂
Nutschell
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